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Dear editor,or
I'm Li Hua,a student from Senior 3.I'm writing to share my suggestions on our English column with you
Actually,while I think our columns are very good,from which we can learn a lot,I still have some advice.For ex-ample,the names of some columns can be changed to help attract readers'attention.What's more,it can't be better if acolumn about some idioms can be included,which will add to our knowledge and let us know more about English culture.In this way,we can avoid some misunderstanding when reading or communicating with others.Last but not least,yournewspaper should pay attention to some spelling mistakes,which in fact is very easy to avoid as long as you arecareful enough.
I'll be grateful if you can consider my advice and hope it will be helpful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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